How Do I Love You So

In this wretched and dark place,
it's the only world I can show my face.
Ashamed of my love,
A past full of disgrace.
And yet all I want is to see your face.
But it's something I've longed to
erase.
Why do I love you so? 
These crazy feelings they need to go.
You have my heart racing like i need to show,
my love for you but I just really don't know 
how I love you so.
It's been a long wild trip,
but this I must rip.
And thats you from my heart
Yea that'd be a better start.
But here comes that thing again 
you make me want to sing and then
You see right through me
do you know what you do to me
All these things I've done you see
Fueling my insanity.
Make me want to fall apart,
Spill knowledge from this broken heart.
All I ever wanted was to be set free,
Can you really not see all of what you've done to me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/29/2013 1:10:00 PM
This is a nice poem, a lot of fervor in the words allowing us to see all the passion you have for this certain someone. Good Job! MC
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Date: 8/22/2013 1:16:00 AM
Nicely done. I like your unique style. Keep up the good work
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