Notes About The Poem

how did it get this far?

i'm at my wit's end
barely clinging to the last remaining illusion
~ hope being the rising sun



Wordku: 15-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 5:27 PM
gosh, been there...that feeling of being frayed gave me pause as well. captivating
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ have a great day
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