How Could You
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When you eviscerate me from your life
I plunge into a vortex of emotional strife
Not only are you cold and fallacious
Your offensiveness is also mendacious
Is it not enough for you to victimize
that you have to constantly criticize
Tell me who do you think you are
Your actions are crazy and bazaar
You are so angry that you see scarlet red
I no longer hurt - you bewilder me instead
June 29, 2018
Copyright © Susan Gentry | Year Posted 2018
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