Susan Gentry Poet Rhyme

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How Could You

When you eviscerate me from your life
I plunge into a vortex of emotional strife

Not only are you cold and fallacious
Your offensiveness is also mendacious

Is it not enough for you to victimize
that you have to constantly criticize

Tell me who do you think you are
Your actions are crazy and bazaar 

You are so angry that you see scarlet red
I no longer hurt - you bewilder me instead

June 29, 2018

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Mystic Rose Rose July 1, 2018 at 5:35 AM When the heart is hurt it can feels many things Susan. Hurt is one of them, beweldered is another. I like the photo you chose to go along with it, Splendid poem , Thanks for sharing, have a great day. Susan Gentry July 1, 2018 at 6:42 PM Thanks, Pixie! You too. :)

Caren Krutsinger June 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM I am moved by this, because I see this in the female realm all of the time, especially between preteen girls and I wonder at the swiftness of their complete indifference and coldness to someone who was for a long time their go-to friend. Well done! Susan Gentry June 30, 2018 at 2:01 PM Thank you. Sad but true.

Vladislav Raven June 29, 2018 at 3:51 PM Hi Susan, such excellent use of your words. I love the content of this one. This couldn't have been easy. An excellent piece. I wish you well in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX Susan Gentry June 30, 2018 at 2:01 AM Thanks so much! So kind of you to read and comment. :)

Frederic Parker June 29, 2018 at 2:30 PM Susan, you took some very difficult words and created a very well written poem with them...good luck in the contest...one I'm staying away from Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 3:27 PM I was too till last minute. Thanks, Frederic, for the kind words. :)

Heidi Sands June 29, 2018 at 10:24 AM You did very well with this Susan! Good luck in the contest :) Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 3:26 PM Thanks, Heidi.

John Castellenas June 29, 2018 at 9:55 AM Amazing use of words. I love how you use the language. Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 3:17 PM Why thank you!

Winged Warrior June 29, 2018 at 9:10 AM Wow...nicely rendered Susan...this challenge is going to be a toughie...enjoyed reading my friend...love & light...^WW^ Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 3:17 PM Thank you so much! Always appreciate your comments. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 29, 2018 at 6:14 AM Very crisp and nicely flowing rhyme,Susan.GL in the contest... Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:28 AM Thank you, :)

Lyric Man June 29, 2018 at 5:49 AM Susan, a good write with big potential for the coming contest! Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:27 AM Why thanks so much!

Faraz Ajmal June 29, 2018 at 4:20 AM I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem of yours, good luck in the contest Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:27 AM Thanks so much!

Jan Allison June 29, 2018 at 3:24 AM I got a chill reading this one susan!!! How could you come up with something so totally different to the humminghbird poem - such contrasts!!! Soupmail:-) hugs jan xx Susan Gentry June 29, 2018 at 7:26 AM Thanks, Jan! And for your help. :)