How Can I Get My Lost Frenzy Back?

These fingers were as restless
as a virile runner doing miles
around the fileld, never getting tired;
that young atlete must have been me...
pounding the keybord's keys
and writing another night away!
How can I get my lost frenzy back?
I get home at a quarter to one,
fix myself a cup of sweet tea,
hoping to fall asleep in an hour,
then glued to the computer screen,
I write another poem and enter a new contest;
and before I glance back at the clock,
it's already five o' clock a. m. and constantly
yawning, I moan with malcontent!
Only once, I promised myself
to take a break and let my fingers rest;
and that promise I broke with an incredible urge:
the very next day, I went back...
with the slowness of a hunch-back,
knowing that I had lied to myself...
I didn't regret my cheating on my weary fingers! 
How could I have done such a naughty thing to them?
And now, I am typing very slowly
as if I am having a writer's block,
they are punishing me for being too unfair!
Oh, I should have shown a little pity for them,
let them relax an entire week...forgetting they existed;
and they would have appreciated my concern and kindness!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 12, 2010 at 9:34 AM
And those fingers are doing quite well with these contests. Congratulations on your secnd place finish in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your big success. Karen
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June 11, 2010 at 10:55 PM
Ah, I hear ya with this one, am all too familiar. congrats on your win!
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June 11, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Congrats Andrew on your 2nd place win in my contest with this wonderful write ... appreciate your support for my contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 10, 2010 at 6:13 PM
A wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck
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June 10, 2010 at 11:39 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Andrew. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2010 at 3:10 AM
Our fingers do need breaks at times, Andrew. When I went for my teacher certificiation, they had to do a fingerprint test. They kept repeating mine because the lines on the fingers had been so worn down from all the typing. Still, it's hard to stay away from the computer. Enjoyed your witty poem, Andrew! Love, Carolyn
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