How To Align a Fine Line

HOW   TO   ALIGN   A    FINE    LINE  


Who can resist the pull of such a competition
Where  the rules are so clear,
But the topic is like sex in the 60s revolution: 
Filled with pitfalls but (yes, it was) -  freer  

          Similar to  the Argentine gaucho named Bruno 
          Who said well there’s one thing I do know
          - Slang is fine, 
          Intentional misspellings are divine,
          But a llama is numero uno. 

And whose  “who’s”   is in question?  Not mine!
Hey,  they’re writing “their” over there
When it oughta be “they’re”.. . . Ok, Fine!
The effect of all this is to affect my degree of care 
(And to effect a change in all poets, I hope).
Since mine is not a KNOCK-OUT of a poem 
And I am certainly no dope
Nor am I a gnome from Nome or even Chomsky Noam
I hesitate to use the non-existent 
Cringer word “irregardless” regardless 
Of the consequences  extant,
Or in future years countless.

……………………………………… 

                                                                                                     
Written by a nameless, talentless poet
For Nancy  Jones’s  Contest   “Fine Line”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/3/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:39:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your win in the contest.Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Sydney
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. Lee
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:42:00 PM
I LOVE this, Syd, and how did you know Bruno's my fifth cousin twice removed??? I'm glad it was such a fabulous write that I could place it somewhere. And thanks for having the balls...ummm...I mean the effrontery.. to use the blackboard screecher of irregardless. Muchas gratitudeness for the write and the support. Beauty eve, Namaste~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:56:00 AM
We each are put off by different things, i for one love verses in slang and/or dialect, yet I like to feel the poet new what he/she was doing when they did it. Such as, i just read a find verse without meter and strtegically placed...2 lines of meter focused in and emphasized the ending. I enjoy wee surprises like that! Light & Love [Hope you're whipping up a ballad for me?]
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Date: 9/26/2011 4:40:00 PM
HI Sydney. Sent you a soupmail. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/26/2011 4:28:00 PM
All the best in the contest Sydney..i am sure this will get a top spot.
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Date: 9/26/2011 1:02:00 PM
Very good Syd. I'm laughing. Tony
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