How To Align a Fine Line

HOW   TO   ALIGN   A    FINE    LINE  


Who can resist the pull of such a competition
Where  the rules are so clear,
But the topic is like sex in the 60s revolution: 
Filled with pitfalls but (yes, it was) -  freer  

          Similar to  the Argentine gaucho named Bruno 
          Who said well there’s one thing I do know
          - Slang is fine, 
          Intentional misspellings are divine,
          But a llama is numero uno. 

And whose  “who’s”   is in question?  Not mine!
Hey,  they’re writing “their” over there
When it oughta be “they’re”.. . . Ok, Fine!
The effect of all this is to affect my degree of care 
(And to effect a change in all poets, I hope).
Since mine is not a KNOCK-OUT of a poem 
And I am certainly no dope
Nor am I a gnome from Nome or even Chomsky Noam
I hesitate to use the non-existent 
Cringer word “irregardless” regardless 
Of the consequences  extant,
Or in future years countless.

……………………………………… 

                                                                                                     
Written by a nameless, talentless poet
For Nancy  Jones’s  Contest   “Fine Line”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Congrats Sydney on your win in the contest.Enjoyed.
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Sydney
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:02 AM
Congratulations on the win. Lee
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 8:42 PM
I LOVE this, Syd, and how did you know Bruno's my fifth cousin twice removed??? I'm glad it was such a fabulous write that I could place it somewhere. And thanks for having the balls...ummm...I mean the effrontery.. to use the blackboard screecher of irregardless. Muchas gratitudeness for the write and the support. Beauty eve, Namaste~N
Guzzi Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:56 AM
We each are put off by different things, i for one love verses in slang and/or dialect, yet I like to feel the poet new what he/she was doing when they did it. Such as, i just read a find verse without meter and strtegically placed...2 lines of meter focused in and emphasized the ending. I enjoy wee surprises like that! Light & Love [Hope you're whipping up a ballad for me?]
Quigley Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:40 PM
HI Sydney. Sent you a soupmail. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest
Maverick Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:28 PM
All the best in the contest Sydney..i am sure this will get a top spot.
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Very good Syd. I'm laughing. Tony
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