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How wonderful the day... when I know you're there; How brilliant the sun... when your love - I wear; How tender the night... when your soul does care; How perfect the stars... when my life - you share. For "If All I Did Was Make You Feel" contest sponsored by Paula Swanson.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest George. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2011 1:47:00 PM

Congrats George on a wonderful win with this excellent entry of awesome poetry my friend.. so happy PS is up and running again so we can all share again..luv..

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/21/2011 11:30:00 AM

Very thoughtful lines George. Congratulations on your win.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/21/2011 10:01:00 AM

So full of gentle passion, would make any woman' feel special. Loved it George, could use a few thoughts like this myself.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2011 5:33:00 AM

Very romantic..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Soup is done so we can dine..Sara