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Hovering House

How You Are Feeling Today                             Sponsored by: Silent One

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Hoisting in hefty hemmed hovering house,
                                             hollowed hunks, higher hames hype


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17 Syllables

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 17, 2023 at 2:14 AM

- Great written - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las - hugs

Silent One

October 15, 2023 at 8:46 AM

Please remember that you cannot mention sponsor in your poem.. as it is against rules of contests.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Jay Narain

October 12, 2023 at 10:40 AM

Nice Monoku with all H words. Only you can think of this.

Victor Buhagiar

October 12, 2023 at 1:57 AM

Heartrending Monoku. So meaningful. Blessings.

Ink Empress

October 12, 2023 at 12:43 AM

Brilliant monoku, very creatively you’ve articulated words together, i think silent one will like this, and i love the depth of this one liner, and your title for it is very unique too. Hovering house, left an impression. Hames hype, higher! Very well written and expressed how you are feeling today, in just 17 syllables, i enjoyed reading this. Thank you also for your comments on my poem, appreciate your support. Very kind of you, and i wish you a blessed day ahead

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