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Hovering House

How You Are Feeling Today Sponsored by: Silent One ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hoisting in hefty hemmed hovering house, hollowed hunks, higher hames hype Checked by: HMS.Com 17 Syllables

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 2:14:00 AM

- Great written - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las - hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:46:00 AM

Please remember that you cannot mention sponsor in your poem.. as it is against rules of contests.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/12/2023 2:06:00 PM

you said a great deal, dearest Sotto, in 17 syllables. I loved higher hames. You always amaze me with your use of vocabulary. Have a blessed day, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 10/12/2023 10:40:00 AM

Nice Monoku with all H words. Only you can think of this.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/12/2023 1:57:00 AM

Heartrending Monoku. So meaningful. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 12:43:00 AM

Brilliant monoku, very creatively you’ve articulated words together, i think silent one will like this, and i love the depth of this one liner, and your title for it is very unique too. Hovering house, left an impression. Hames hype, higher! Very well written and expressed how you are feeling today, in just 17 syllables, i enjoyed reading this. Thank you also for your comments on my poem, appreciate your support. Very kind of you, and i wish you a blessed day ahead