Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Hovering At the Threshold of My Self Lost Paradise

i saw my face in your eyes before our marriage
                    felt to be matched with and made for each other 
                    rhythm of your nuance was with me in those days
                    as the river earth and water tied together as one
                   shimmering waves of feeling carried heavenly waltz 
                     our bower was our closed chests of tranquility 
                     adored each other we were in oneness in soul 
                     all these are my golden days' sweet memories
                    now my sullen solitude embarks painful hysteria                  
                    hovering at the threshold of my self lost paradise

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 12:19 PM - Bl, a deeply moving but beautifully written poems - A song of sorrow that I give a big seven - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath August 26, 2016 at 1:26 PM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your nice comment and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie August 25, 2016 at 6:10 PM So sad...Beautifully written. The language is lovely, expressions very heartfelt. Blessings, lynn Bl Devnath August 26, 2016 at 7:53 AM Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Daniel Turner August 25, 2016 at 3:40 PM So beautiful and yet sadness in the end. I for one can relate to this heartfelt poem. Great job BL. Bl Devnath August 25, 2016 at 3:47 PM Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment with 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl