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Hovering At the Threshold of My Self Lost Paradise

i saw my face in your eyes before our marriage felt to be matched with and made for each other rhythm of your nuance was with me in those days as the river earth and water tied together as one shimmering waves of feeling carried heavenly waltz our bower was our closed chests of tranquility adored each other we were in oneness in soul all these are my golden days' sweet memories now my sullen solitude embarks painful hysteria hovering at the threshold of my self lost paradise

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 12:19:00 PM

- Bl, a deeply moving but beautifully written poems - A song of sorrow that I give a big seven - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2016 1:26:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your nice comment and for 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/25/2016 6:10:00 PM

So sad...Beautifully written. The language is lovely, expressions very heartfelt. Blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2016 7:53:00 AM

Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/25/2016 3:40:00 PM

So beautiful and yet sadness in the end. I for one can relate to this heartfelt poem. Great job BL.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/25/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment with 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl