Housewife

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the housewife looks out
stained window, sees herb garden....
soul journeys through pane  


Written: November 10, 2020

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/16/2020 8:02:00 AM

Housewife or the Queen of the house now letting her soul on journey thru window pane will soon step outside. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2020 11:29:00 AM

Anisha, Maybe she is the CEO but it isn't that way for many. Yes, looking means longing so outside on a pretty day she will go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

JCB Brul

Date: 11/15/2020 1:50:00 AM

I love this heart-warming senryu dear Sara..especially how soul takes its journey through window pane due to restricted mobility...A FAVE!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2020 1:14:00 PM

JCB, Thanks for the visit. I am honored that you would fav this one. Yes, age takes its toll on a body. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/11/2020 3:41:00 PM

This is adorable... I think 'housewife' is a little modest, however... How about 'Queen of the Kitchen?' Or perhaps 'Real Estate CEO?' Homemakers are often so underappreciated, if appreciated at all. Courtesy and Caring, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2020 3:33:00 AM

Gershon, Well, my job once was important but now I am like a wounded big bird. LOL..Age has taken its toll on my health and ability to do what needs to be done. I agree women are under appreciated. The woman who is a single mom with at least one job out of the home, children to care for, and all the work at home has her hands full. I don't see how they do it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2020 12:46:00 PM

what a charming little poem Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2020 12:51:00 PM

Jan, I am glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2020 1:56:00 PM

What a wonderful last line!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2020 2:53:00 PM

Andrea, Your visit is uplifting. I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/10/2020 7:07:00 AM

Sara, your Senryu reminds me of Shakespeare's line, "What light through yonder window breaks..." in the case of your write...what memories a housewife has from her window. Lovely work.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2020 7:57:00 AM

Jenna, Being trapped from the coronavirus we have to look for beauty wherever we can find it. Your presence here is uplifting.Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara