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House On Fire

My house is on fire? Now don't rush me out In haste,as there is something I can't go on without. For my heart has started to kindle, As beyond the smoke and flame I see, An important bag of mine there,on that shelf Waiting to be picked up by me. To hell with that bag? Mind your tongue, you don't have a clue. When you take a look at it's contents Will you understand my point of view. My memories- Momentos from school,albums, A dead friend's last words written for me, in it lie. Organised pictures of family, childhood stuff, I can't stand back and watch them all die. I know that I must hurry, my house is on fire, But without it I won't budge through the door. Because I can earn back money to buy furniture,antiques,gems, But not the treasure in my bag,for sure. (Dedicated To My Memory Bag)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/24/2012 7:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sadaf. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 11:37:00 AM
wow, you have your pictures in a bag.? that is very wise of you. I have like 15 photo albums and I could never get them all out the door, but If I could organize them the way you have done in a bag, it would be perfect. LIke you, I'd save the pics for sure GOOD ONE.
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:10:00 AM
An excellent write, Sadaf. I enjoyed this very much. Best wishes in the contest. Love, KIm
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem on the contest theme Sadif.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:16:00 AM
an excellent poem Sadif and sounds just what the doctor ordered for this contest. sounds like a winner to me... have a great day.God bless
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