Nami-Ann Corpuz Poet Rhyme

House of Loneliness

Misery and jealousy
lurk in the bedrooms here.
Black and eerie,covered with drapes.
No light allowed in here.

The parlor is a wonderful sight,
Pretty pictures on the wall.
Flowers everywhere.
It is just a sabotage
to get you to the bedroom there

They suck you in and tell you lies
to make you feel sorry for them.
They drown you in booze
and teach you to hate
so you can be one of them.

Beat up a wife, envy your friends.
Hate your siblings for having 
something.
You want to be hateful
when others have what you don't.
Pick on people for nothing!

All these things that I have listed
will get you in this abode here.
Sadness and misery and loneliness
lurking in the bedrooms here.

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Poet Destroyer A January 19, 2014 at 6:25 PM Hi Nami, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A January 19, 2014 at 8:09 AM Nami Ann, deep in the heart. . , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT" Nami-Ann Corpuz January 19, 2014 at 12:29 PM Nice to meet you and thanks so much for the warm welcome. I am looking forward to making friends at Poetry Soup. I am 53 yrs. old and have lived on Maui my whole life. I have always enjoyed creating with words and became interested in Poetry while taking a creative writing class at our local community college. This is the first time I have ever posted any of my poems so please excuse the mistakes I will probably make. I got really excited when I already found comments on my poems. I look forward to talking to you again.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 6:40 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Nami Ann- I choose your first well written poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Nami-Ann Corpuz January 19, 2014 at 12:33 PM Thanks for the kind welcome and the heads up. I have always treated people with kindness and respect so I will have no trouble posting here. It is already a good experience for me and I look forward to making new friends here. Again, thanks for the front door welcome because it really helped.