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House of Cards

this house of cards I can't build faster each one placed spells sweet disaster keep on building, higher it goes standing up on my tiptoes the wind blows hard it stays in place feeling your breeze blowing on my face house of cards is holding strong one on one, on and on the final card is put in place queen of hearts, saving grace it all trembles and starts to fall fantasies that hit the wall a house of cards is always weak be careful of the ones you seek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2010 6:16:00 AM
nice do you want to chat?
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:11:00 AM
beautiful. and very true. wonderful symbolism with the cards and what a powerful meaning behind them.
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:06:00 AM
So clever! Good advice
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