House of Cards

this house of cards
I can't build faster
each one placed spells
sweet disaster
keep on building, higher it goes
standing up on my tiptoes

the wind blows hard
it stays in place
feeling your breeze
blowing on my face
house of cards is holding strong
one on one, on and on

the final card is put in place
queen of hearts, saving grace
it all trembles and starts to fall
fantasies that hit the wall
a house of cards is always weak
be careful of the ones you seek
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sokolowski Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:16 AM
nice do you want to chat?
Alcorn Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:11 AM
beautiful. and very true. wonderful symbolism with the cards and what a powerful meaning behind them.
Palli Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:06 AM
So clever! Good advice
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