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Hours of Darkness

Within the confines of my four bedroom walls, In a chair by the window I quietly sit, I cannot be seen in the hours darkness falls, Witnessing acts no one confesses to admit, Myself only knowing the real culprit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/11/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thanks for your entry in my contest..Congrats on your work being in the winner's list..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2017 6:03:00 PM
Susan, Thanks for entering this one in my contest..For it to be an English Quintain it needs two more lines that end in a rhyme that rhymes with line 2 and line 4..If you make those changes it will pass on into the next round if not it will be eliminated..Thanks Sara
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Date: 7/24/2017 9:09:00 AM
Very dark write indeed, Susan!
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Date: 7/24/2017 7:02:00 AM
Stealth, in the cat bird seat. Very interesting Susan.
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