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Hour glass drips Slowly and Time goes by like snowflakes On a cold, cold day "Time can do so much, my love" Leaving deep scars within Are you still mine? Please don't turn away Please don't run~stay "For I need you, my love" Time slips by my darling, slowly wisps away Each day that you are gone I desire your love, I need your love, please stay All day, today and every day Hour glass drips Slowly and Time goes by like snowflakes On a cold, cold day "Time can do so much, my love" Leaving deep scars within "Are you still mine?" Please don't turn away Please don't run~stay "For I need you, I need you today" Under the influence of "Unchained Melody" by Elvis Presley Sponsor: Teppo Gren Contest: Gren's Evergreens(Golden Oldies) #2 Written: April 23, 2016

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Joseph May

Date: 5/25/2016 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2016 3:37:00 PM

you did a great job here, Sara and wow, I can't believe all the poems of yours that got past me last week!!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/28/2016 6:26:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 4/28/2016 2:10:00 AM

This stays in mind... Beautiful!

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/27/2016 5:35:00 PM

That song is memorable - as is our poem. Have you ever heard the version the Righteous brothers did? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2016 6:44:00 AM

I listened to several versions with singing and several instrumental ones..I was familiar with the song from a long time ago but had not really paid that much attention to it even though I could sing a few of the lines..LOL..Sara

Theresa Cw

Date: 4/26/2016 7:59:00 PM

Wow!! This is so very beautiful Sara, I so totally agree with what FJ Thomas has said below. Good luck in the contest.. A Fav and a 7. So glad I stopped by for this fantastic read...I also listened to when Elvis sang this song; sure brought tears to my eyes. hugs Theresa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2016 11:55:00 PM

Oh, did Elvis sing it too? it's such a beautiful song and you were well inspired by it, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/26/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thanks for the comment..Yes, he did it in concert and made an album titled Unchained Melody and his version of the song was on the album..Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/23/2016 6:45:00 PM

The Unchained Melody song was played with a violin as the opening song on my wedding day..I love it..and love your poem much more.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2016 7:15:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..Long time no see..Good choice of song for your wedding..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 4/23/2016 3:27:00 PM

Beautifully flowing lyric Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to leave a comment..I hope that they flow but not like a river of tears..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2016 2:23:00 PM

- This is beautiful, dear Sara! - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Sun :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to leave a comment..May this be the best week end up to this point in your life and may each one only get better..Sara