Hour Fall Back and Energy Lack
an hour falls back
energy body does lack
ate one more big mac
so old in stature
hope will last another year
put out to pasture
ran down from the peak
a wide creek water would seek
hear sounds it did speak
Creek From Pike's Peak to Cripple Creek
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