Hounds

Onward then does Time ascend the eons it does build Within the endless void of space which never shall be filled Deep within the eons past, a Potency there compels Horrors be extended from Evils which are Hells’ And herein do I dwell within Hell’s castle keep With keys I do open doors and let the evils creep Avarice and malfeasance let loose to run amuck Despair and sorrow following, causing their havoc Slimes that ooze and glisten with names that you know well Cultivate and incubate the tribulations that are Hells’ I unleash the Hounds of Hell, in silence do I watch Devoutly do they search - for souls they will debauch Hounds of Hell cause someone to bid their soul adieu … And now, my festered eyes await the soul they’ll bring from YOU!

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David Smith

Date: 3/27/2022 3:43:00 AM

Taking nothing for granted I believe I have a Guardian Angel with all that has happened in my life and my Fathers before me. He should have drowned. My Auntie who could not swim remembers Dad going under for second time as a kid and finding herself at edge of water hole at back of place with Dad coughing up water and herself all wet. Had double pneumonia as baby, not expected to live. Got localised lymphoma cancer 2019. Not back yet. Well crafted poem we shouldn't dismiss lightly. David in NZ

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/10/2014 3:11:00 AM

Yes, Jack. The Hounds of hell will devour a soul if that soul does not have the strength to resist. This would certainly be a nightmare that would get your attention. Well written and recorded, my friend. Hey, Jack. I thought since you had a dog as you constant companion as a boy, that you might like my poem. " Sonny And The Pooch." Take a look, my friend. Robert.

Jack Clark
Date: 7/10/2014 9:18:00 AM

The soul can become an "easy meal" for those who go unawares. I'm pleased you liked reading "Hounds...", Robert. I have already read, and commented, on your "Sonny ..." - which I thought to be another of your wonderful writes. Jack C

Arlene Smith

Date: 5/22/2014 3:11:00 PM

Ummm.. Made me want to say an extra prayer tonight... A fan... Arlene

Jack Clark
Date: 5/22/2014 3:59:00 PM

Ha! Yes, I understand. This poem doesn't represent ME, but it WAS in a nightmare I had ... and ... I recorded it. I think it's a bit "dark" in character! Jack C

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:12:00 AM

JACK, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 9:17:00 PM

Hi Jack... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2014 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jack

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/11/2014 3:56:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found this to be a friendly community of poetry lovers; I hope that will be your experience as well. Jump in, write and enjoy!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/11/2014 4:08:00 AM

Well penned Jack. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2014 4:09:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jack :) - I choose your first well written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2014 7:39:00 AM

Jack, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@