Hounds


Onward then does Time ascend the eons it does build
Within the endless void of space which never shall be filled

Deep within the eons past, a Potency there compels
Horrors be extended from Evils which are Hells’

And herein do I dwell within Hell’s castle keep
With keys I do open doors and let the evils creep

Avarice and malfeasance let loose to run amuck
Despair and sorrow following, causing their havoc

Slimes that ooze and glisten with names that you know well
Cultivate and incubate the tribulations that are Hells’

I unleash the Hounds of Hell, in silence do I watch
Devoutly do they search - for souls they will debauch

Hounds of Hell cause someone to bid their soul adieu …
And now, my festered eyes await the soul they’ll bring from YOU!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 3:43 AM
Taking nothing for granted I believe I have a Guardian Angel with all that has happened in my life and my Fathers before me. He should have drowned. My Auntie who could not swim remembers Dad going under for second time as a kid and finding herself at edge of water hole at back of place with Dad coughing up water and herself all wet. Had double pneumonia as baby, not expected to live. Got localised lymphoma cancer 2019. Not back yet. Well crafted poem we shouldn't dismiss lightly. David in NZ
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July 10, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Yes, Jack. The Hounds of hell will devour a soul if that soul does not have the strength to resist. This would certainly be a nightmare that would get your attention. Well written and recorded, my friend. Hey, Jack. I thought since you had a dog as you constant companion as a boy, that you might like my poem. " Sonny And The Pooch." Take a look, my friend. Robert.
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July 10, 2014 at 9:18 AM
The soul can become an "easy meal" for those who go unawares. I'm pleased you liked reading "Hounds...", Robert. I have already read, and commented, on your "Sonny ..." - which I thought to be another of your wonderful writes. Jack C
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Ummm.. Made me want to say an extra prayer tonight... A fan... Arlene
Clark Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Ha! Yes, I understand. This poem doesn't represent ME, but it WAS in a nightmare I had ... and ... I recorded it. I think it's a bit "dark" in character! Jack C
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May 15, 2014 at 9:12 AM
JACK, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 13, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Hi Jack... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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May 13, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jack
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May 11, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found this to be a friendly community of poetry lovers; I hope that will be your experience as well. Jump in, write and enjoy!
Mohammed Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:08 AM
Well penned Jack. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.
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May 10, 2014 at 4:09 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jack :) - I choose your first well written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 10, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Jack, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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