Hotter Than Lightning

Bodies intimately intertwine: fueling feelings of ecstasy, marking the moment two souls combine. The angelic sparkle in her eye: lifts your spirit, beyond flesh and bone, soaring high as the stars in the sky. Swearing she will never be alone: a soft, sensual, satisfied sigh, punctuates every word with a moan. Sex feels so sublime; it's frightening, a feeling surmounting happiness: a burning flame, hotter than lightning. Her tender kiss fills your heart with bliss, as she melts within your trembling arms: for you've never known; a love like this.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Beautiful. Superbly penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Yours is the most romantic so far. LOVE a great romantic poem like this , Emile. Congrats on the win.
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:06 AM
So romantic and passionately written with an amazing flow of words, Emile. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 11:27 PM
One sizzling, hot read here, Emile! Well done, too! Congrats on your win :)
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:30 PM
wonderful words of romance and passion! Moving- I could feel each embrace in each word written. thank you for sharing and be blessed! ;)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Luloo, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:39 AM
There is a powerful flow in your lines Emile. Good luck in the contest:) Amitiés
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Thanks Anne-Marie, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Kannan Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Beautiful one for the contest... Reads like a winner... Good luck with the contest...
Pinet Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Supraja, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Williams Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 8:32 AM
What a brilliant entry for the contest. Good luck A 7++
Pinet Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Thank you Maria, your comments are welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
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