Hotter Than...

One pounding heartbeat---
Flame behind impassioned eyes
Two entwined spirits



By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/16/2010 8:36:00 PM
Nicely done...I like the Flame behind impassioned eyes line. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work. If you are going to an establishment where the servers despise you, I'd suggest trying a different spot...lol
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