Hot Water Spring

hot water spring's heat
heals and cures sick and tired;
energy not lost




Haiku syllable count 5/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Mohan Short but with so much meaning and emotion. Thank you for the nice comment on my Colours poem.
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June 27, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Robin, thanks for reading my poem and also liking it. Haikus are meant to convey a lot in few words, esp. of nature, that is what I gather. Mohan
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