Hot Water

Bharata Natyam of the pole…
Excitement at the water hole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 2:57 AM
sounds like Indian festival, a very fine write. lightning ink.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 5:18 PM
Good one..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Nice images you have created of of the Indian classical dance Bharat natyam, Robb
Campi Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 3:57 PM
This poem had a quick and pleasing sound. However who is Bharata Natyam? JancarlC.
Campi Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Thanks for you comment on my work: "Two Haikus" I will be back to comment on "Hot Water" Jancarl C.
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