Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Hot Summer - Sweet Summer

HOT SUMMER

        blazes of fierce sun
become stronger day by day
   vanish with quick rain.
                                                                 SWEET SUMMER

                                                                 the hottest season,
                                                          blesses with the sweetest fruits,
                                                                   nature’s miracle.


Date: 23-06-20 20

Summer Haiku's
Contest Judged:  6/28/2020 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Position : placed 5th

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Aditi Mishra July 1, 2020 at 1:35 AM This is a really creative muse! The way you have portrayed the light and dark aspect of blazing summer is unique. Congratulations on your win. Blessings. Keep writing and inspiring. Patri Venkata Ramana July 2, 2020 at 1:02 AM thank you for appreciating the two sides of summer.

Funom Makama June 29, 2020 at 3:12 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved. Patri Venkata Ramana June 30, 2020 at 11:57 AM thanks a lot for the compliments. with warm regards.

Jeanne Mcgee June 29, 2020 at 9:48 AM Nicely penned Patri. blesses with the sweetest fruits, what a wonderful line. Congrats! :D Patri Venkata Ramana June 30, 2020 at 11:55 AM sweet compliments. Thank you very much.

V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:46 AM Beautifully written:-) Congratulations on your placement. Keep writing.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa Patri Venkata Ramana June 30, 2020 at 11:54 AM Thanks a lot for wishing. with regards,

Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 2:27 AM Hot and sweet together.. Great thought Patri.. Congrats.. Patri Venkata Ramana June 30, 2020 at 11:52 AM Thank you very much for your appreciation.

Eve Roper June 28, 2020 at 5:15 PM Congratulations on your win, Patri. Hugs Eve Patri Venkata Ramana June 28, 2020 at 11:52 PM Really glad to receive compliments from you. Thank you very much.

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2020 at 4:17 PM Congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku's! Patri Venkata Ramana June 28, 2020 at 11:48 PM Thank you very much for your appreciation and encouragement.