Theresa Marie C. Poet Senryu

Hot Sand In Summer

Hot Sand In Summer

Hot sand in summer
Moon shines across the ocean
Just like your kisses

A peaceful evening
Gently caressing my arms
The shore swarms with love.

Written: 2/22/15
Theresa Marie C.

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Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2015 at 10:47 PM this one I like a LOT

Julia Ward May 31, 2015 at 4:10 AM A pretty senryu! Julia, :)

Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 2:26 PM oh Theresa these are so romantic:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Theresa Marie C. May 13, 2015 at 10:52 PM Thank you Jan for your beautiful comment and especially for the 7.

Michael Dom May 13, 2015 at 8:09 AM High five Theresa Marie - probably senryu though rather than haiku, cheers! :-) Theresa Marie C. May 13, 2015 at 10:51 PM Thank you very much Michael for the comment and also thank your for informing that it is a senryu, will change it. Cheers