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Brimstone's red glow, hot
Burning sulfur rising up
into the sunset



Inspired by Raul's photo seascape! 
Thank you for the inspiration!!
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Smith Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 10:59 PM
Thank you for sharing, enjoyed. Ellen
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February 15, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Oooh, an undersea earthquake! Great interpretation of the photo, Doris. Good luck in Raul's contest. This is quite a powerful haiku! Love, Carolyn
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February 14, 2010 at 12:12 PM
A wonderful Haiku and entry for this contest.. my entry is Serenity.. such lovely visuals Doris.. not like Craziness ..don't want to visualize that scene..haha.. good luck in this unique contest..luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 14, 2010 at 10:27 AM
nice words you chose for your 'seascape' pretty.<: -Always Lynette
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Such a beautiful reflection to the seascape picture. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Interesting interpertation of the picture. Sounds active and alive. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Mom....Soup Mail
Knop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 3:36 AM
I hadthis experience already! Nicely penned Haiku, Doris! Like your "Burning sulfur rising up"..Rgds. Gert
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Beautiful Haiku Doris...Love the Brimstone's red glow...good luck on whichever Haiku you enter in the contest...enjoy them all...Marty
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