Hot Ice

Was your heart,

           woven from the ant-artic circle?

        Did your speech derive from the bitterness

   of the deaf-adder, which is'nt moved by the charmers

                                  charm?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Prophet Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 8:58 PM
thank you so much carol brown for your praises.
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August 17, 2009 at 8:50 PM
thank you so much carol brown for your praise. would you like to communicate on a regular basis? send me your e-mail address. haave a wonderful evening.
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 5:02 AM
Good morning Elijah. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 6:01 PM
Very nice..strong and meaningful verse..well done.
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