Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Hot Hot Hot

The heat is rising up,  up,  up 
and I feel like a wilting pup 
The breeze seems to be hiding 
and summer is happily sidling
down the lane it's just insane!

I meet the day with trepidation 
every hour of sun is on probation 
can I take it ..thats my one refrain 
I like it but, I wish it would rain  
common rain... this is insane ! 

Wish it would rain, wish it would rain
rain, rain, rain,

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Lyric Man June 30, 2018 at 5:25 PM You're write is hot times three (pun intended)!

John Sensele June 30, 2018 at 12:12 PM Pixie, I enjoyed reading this rhyme poem. Excellent use of imagery and imagination entwined in this poetic nugget. Keep the verve flowing even if it gets rather hot to create, narrate and write. John, Zambia

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 30, 2018 at 11:28 AM Ah, and as I read this, sweating it up, it has just started to sprinkle... it worked! ;) xomo

Tim Smith June 30, 2018 at 9:39 AM Go sit by the river and have an iced tea

Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:48 AM With such emotions ..your longing for rain will surely be met..relief is in sight!