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Hot Hot Hot

The heat is rising up, up, up and I feel like a wilting pup The breeze seems to be hiding and summer is happily sidling down the lane it's just insane! I meet the day with trepidation every hour of sun is on probation can I take it ..thats my one refrain I like it but, I wish it would rain common rain... this is insane ! Wish it would rain, wish it would rain rain, rain, rain,

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Lyric Man

Date: 6/30/2018 5:25:00 PM

You're write is hot times three (pun intended)!

John Sensele

Date: 6/30/2018 12:12:00 PM

Pixie, I enjoyed reading this rhyme poem. Excellent use of imagery and imagination entwined in this poetic nugget. Keep the verve flowing even if it gets rather hot to create, narrate and write. John, Zambia

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/30/2018 11:28:00 AM

Ah, and as I read this, sweating it up, it has just started to sprinkle... it worked! ;) xomo

Tim Smith

Date: 6/30/2018 9:39:00 AM

Go sit by the river and have an iced tea

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/30/2018 7:48:00 AM

With such emotions ..your longing for rain will surely be met..relief is in sight!