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Hot Dog My Red Hot!

Sumptuous
savoury
smothered in chili
onions heaped high
on a tasty mustard bun
I will not waste one morsel
of you
My eyes feast upon you
on my plate,
as you sit and await your fate!
My palette awaits
I want to hold you
and devour you
Love of my life,
you make my mouth water
I am tantalized by your smell
Your aroma tempts me
My taste buds tingle
Come closer!
You are my Red Hot!
Hot Dog,
I have been awaiting this moment
to bite into your burning flesh,
and experience your texture,
and enjoy Umami
The 6th sense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2009 5:56:00 PM
Deidre - I will never look at eating a hot dog the same way again - God bless, mj
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:44:00 AM
Congrats Deirdre on this tasty poem being featured on Poetry Soup. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:19:00 AM
Absolutely criminal to work up an old man with gout. The charm of this poem is that your reader can clearly see the tatalizing object. My mouth watered all the way through, but doctor says hot dogs are bad for gout. Congrats on this clever selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:46:00 PM
hehe... yep, with onions are the best!! ;) Very yummy write, and now you have me wanting a hot dog too! haha Congrats on being featured this week! Love, Amy :)
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Date: 2/8/2009 4:12:00 PM
Interesting perspective here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I belated welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:40:00 AM
This isn't fair to a fat guy like me. Fun write. God Bless. Vince (WELCOME TO THE SOUP)
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:24:00 PM
I love this poem. It's the best. One of the best pleasures in life is eating a descent hot dog. Absolute deliciousness!
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Date: 1/27/2009 3:08:00 AM
I love it...you made me hungry too, dog gone it! It's so cute...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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