Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Hot Apple Pie and the Sweet Wee Tot

Hot apple pie Mom took so long to make

sat briefly on the shelf so temptingly!

Nobody thinks a sweet wee tot could take

hot apple pie Mom took so long to bake.

I’ve shut my mouth about my tummy ache.

One more vanished pie stays a mystery.

Hot apple pie Mom took so long to make

sat briefly on the shelf so temptingly!


For the "Alphabet Contest -Letter A" that I am not sure is going to be judged, but I wrote it a while back after I saw it posted, so will post it anyway! Are you out there, Freddie???

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Daver Austin April 6, 2016 at 1:09 PM This once fat wee tot also stole a pie. My brother shot butter at me across the dinner table. We both went to bed without any more supper. Fortunately I got my piece of pie. Love your work. Love, daver

Abdullah Alhemaidy April 6, 2016 at 6:11 AM Cool!

Rob Carmack April 5, 2016 at 7:44 PM One of the reasons I don't enter his contests. If he does not judge the contest, hopefully you will be able to use this for another down the road. Liked you poem.

Sara Kendrick April 5, 2016 at 6:33 PM So your eyes were larger than your stomach..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..Angel/Angels have protected me many times from harmful situations..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong April 5, 2016 at 4:55 PM This is sweet Andrea. Ymmmmm! ; )

Bl Devnath April 5, 2016 at 11:58 AM i have no idea about this form but the poem is very nice to read. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Timothy Hicks April 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM "Who .... me?" *wipes the pie crumbs off of chin* .... cute. But I really shouldn't be feeling hungry now, it's getting late. Lol. Nice triolet. I'm not sure where Freddie is either ...

Daniel Turner April 4, 2016 at 7:43 PM I always did take you for a pie thief. Fun read Andrea. Peace my friend:)

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2016 at 4:14 PM yummy , you put a smile on my face : )

Tim Smith April 4, 2016 at 3:47 PM I can so see myself hiding the belly ache...I think Freddy is here under a different name.

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 3:28 PM Absolutely delightful Andrea this sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars April 4, 2016 at 3:07 PM Well written Andrea! Good luck in the contest! :)-luloo