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Hot Apple Pie and the Sweet Wee Tot

Hot apple pie Mom took so long to make sat briefly on the shelf so temptingly! Nobody thinks a sweet wee tot could take hot apple pie Mom took so long to bake. I’ve shut my mouth about my tummy ache. One more vanished pie stays a mystery. Hot apple pie Mom took so long to make sat briefly on the shelf so temptingly! For the "Alphabet Contest -Letter A" that I am not sure is going to be judged, but I wrote it a while back after I saw it posted, so will post it anyway! Are you out there, Freddie???

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Daver Austin

Date: 4/6/2016 1:09:00 PM

This once fat wee tot also stole a pie. My brother shot butter at me across the dinner table. We both went to bed without any more supper. Fortunately I got my piece of pie. Love your work. Love, daver

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/6/2016 6:11:00 AM

Cool!

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/5/2016 7:44:00 PM

One of the reasons I don't enter his contests. If he does not judge the contest, hopefully you will be able to use this for another down the road. Liked you poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/5/2016 6:33:00 PM

So your eyes were larger than your stomach..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..Angel/Angels have protected me many times from harmful situations..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/5/2016 4:55:00 PM

This is sweet Andrea. Ymmmmm! ; )

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/5/2016 11:58:00 AM

i have no idea about this form but the poem is very nice to read. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/4/2016 11:52:00 PM

"Who .... me?" *wipes the pie crumbs off of chin* .... cute. But I really shouldn't be feeling hungry now, it's getting late. Lol. Nice triolet. I'm not sure where Freddie is either ...