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it's too hot not even ice hit's the spot memories of all things cold ice cream bars used to be sold So hot, to dang hot my body feels like rot barely a breeze caught it's just so freakin hot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/30/2012 7:37:00 AM
Lol...love the expression here..though its hot here as well!!!
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:49:00 PM
Ruth you obviously do not live in the Uk, we are freezing and wet here, like the poem though..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 2:41:00 AM
simple but interesting to read .thank you for sharing .jk
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:02:00 AM
I am on holiday in Turkey and here is hot to - but i love it - Like your poem Ruth. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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