Hot

it's too hot
not even ice hit's the spot
memories of all things cold
ice cream bars used to be sold

So hot, to dang hot
my body feels like rot
barely a breeze caught
it's just so freakin hot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 7:37 AM
Lol...love the expression here..though its hot here as well!!!
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:49 PM
Ruth you obviously do not live in the Uk, we are freezing and wet here, like the poem though..David
Chakrapany Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 2:41 AM
simple but interesting to read .thank you for sharing .jk
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 1:02 AM
I am on holiday in Turkey and here is hot to - but i love it - Like your poem Ruth. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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