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Hot!

HOT!

HOT!
Inspiration?
Low
Humidity?
High    very high
One really doesn’t feel like writing poetry
But what does one do on a hot    steaming day?
I’ll tell you what one does not do –
Work!
Oh it’s a day for invention
Conjure up something not too taxing on the brain
Even the thought of mental effort is painful    so
Here goes

There is a peaceful    verdant     cool valley
Between two snow-capped mountain peaks –
Mount Serene    and
Mount Bliss
A frothing    bubbling    murmuring stream
                            runs happily through a meadow
I can hear the Tonkawonka song it sings
                           as it splashes against the rocks
(The Tonkawonka were a local Indian tribe    now no more)
It is beside this stream I have spread my Indian blanket
         set down my small ice chest
just across the stream    almost obscured by the rushes
         a young deer bows its head to drink
I lazily uncap a cold beer – take a sip
WONDERFUL!
I lean my head back against a willow stump    and
Dream
Not a cloud in the sky
The heavens so blue it nearly hurts my eyes
I close my lids
Am just dropping-off    when
I have this waking-dream

I’m in the city
Tall buildings surround
Eggs are frying on the sidewalk
Sun beating down    beating down
I can’t stand it!
This is a nightmare!
I wake up
This is no dream
It is HOT!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/31/2010 8:16:00 AM
Excellent my friend! Masterfully done. I took a trip with you and never left the farm! (now I get to go out and play(work) in the 93 degree humid Florida heat. I shall try and keep your conjuring efforts in mind. :)
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Date: 7/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
I've been missing out a lot, Daver-not been able to visit more often because of school, but truly glad I came across this to lighten this oppressive heat. You described it pefectly. It is a nightmare! Looking for some rain today! Goes to my favs. Love, audrey
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Date: 7/10/2010 11:46:00 AM
"Absolutely" Daver! Thanks for gracious comment. This is a narrative of clarity in expression of a message, "The ultimate." Have you ever thought of maybe doing a blog illustrating this awesome technique? I think it would be of great value to others, and myself for sure, for the truck driver needs all the help he can get. In expressing the awesome message of his heart. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:11:00 PM
It definitely is!! Where isn't it not hot?? Need to go there ;) This is yet another write of yours that I am really enjoying--really love how you take me from hot-->to not---> to hot!!! you sure are one witty and clever poet, no wonder Andrea loves your writes!! and that is so cool that you like etherees too--am just discovering it :) well enjoy your Hot day, haha wonder when you'll be writing about the cold??? -- nikko :)
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