Hospital Visit

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tic toc the ticking of the clock steel blue resounding thru and thru roll call the long walk down the hall white coats dispensing antidotes AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 22, 2020 for contest YOUR RHY-ME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on April 27, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/29/2019 7:11:00 PM

I understand being captive in that scenario. bless you and yours

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2019 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/29/2019 2:27:00 AM

G'day Line … well done again Line. Hospital visits are necessary at times, but few are keen to be in there long. Lindsay

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2019 6:05:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lindsay.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2019 8:40:00 PM

The Best Kind of Hospital Visit! -- As short as possible. Nicely framed. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 9:21:00 PM

In-and-out as seldom as possible for sure.

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/28/2019 5:56:00 PM

each stanza painted another layer to your poem and left a visual of unease...well done

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:25:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Frederic.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/28/2019 5:37:00 PM

Line, I stay far away from them. I do not line visiting. For one, a hospital carries the most potent germs available. Being a patient is far worse. I speak for me. A good book is "Death by Medicine". Well done, Line PR

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:26:00 PM

I hear ya, Panagiota.