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Horses Beauty

My hooves sound like thunder upon the ground, My coat is of the blackest night, My mane shines like a thousand suns, My tail is as graceful as the river. My cries cannot be heard with the ears, They can only be heard by the heart, The eyes cannot see me, The heart can sense me. When my name is spoken, I raise my head to it’s sound, All other creatures revere me, I am the ruler of the forest. I can stop a fire with my voice alone, The river becomes still when I near it, The wind disappears at the sight of me, I drive rain clouds into hiding. I am nothing but beauty, A voice on the wind, A ripple in the still water, The stillness if the forest. I am the horse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 12:38:00 PM
Well done!
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lizzy. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:50:00 PM
A nice personification. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/13/2010 9:37:00 AM
nice . enjoyed
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:18:00 AM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:09:00 AM
You are the horse and i am one who loved this write:)... this was a cool write
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