Anu Nayak Poet Rhyme

Horses

HORSES

Knight of a famous land wanted a best horse for warfare
To buy, along with loyal consul, he landed in horse-fair
Many were on display, but one superior struck his sight
Bay coat, brown muzzle, coronet, fetlock in legs white
Measured from the withers , stood robust long and wide
Gaskin, Stifle, hock in hind legs strong for an enduring ride
Masculine back and powerhouse profound in the croup
This equine for sure would stand elegant in the troop
Perfect shock absorbing frog placed beneath the hoof
Poll on head positioned right to flex the bit sans any goof
Bouncy forelock ,mane and tail swayed with its gallop and gait
Finding place in Knight’s finest stable, its prestige did elevate
Love was in the air when its eyes located a lovely white mare
Mare was quick to catch the love cues from this special horse there!!

20th October 2016
For contest-Horses by Shadow Hamilton

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Chris Hagy December 19, 2017 at 9:02 PM Beautiful description of our magnificent equines!...love the mid-evil aspect too :) Although, I know first hand all too well about mares in heat! haha :)

Sandra Haight October 31, 2016 at 2:57 PM A lovely rhyming poem about horses Anulaxmi! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Anu Nayak November 8, 2016 at 12:47 PM Thank you very much dear Sandra, glad you liked my poem:) //love,Anu:)

Len Gasun October 31, 2016 at 11:45 AM Wow! This is such amazing my dear friend, Anulaxmi! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers! Anu Nayak October 31, 2016 at 11:52 AM Thank you very much dear Galeo, glad you liked my poem:) //love,Anu:)

Joanna Daniel October 30, 2016 at 9:17 AM Wonderful Anulaxmi:) congratulations on your win with this lovely story:) Anu Nayak October 31, 2016 at 11:08 AM Thank you dear Jo, glad you liked my story//love,Anu:)

Joseph May October 30, 2016 at 8:22 AM Congrats on a fine win! Anu Nayak October 31, 2016 at 11:09 AM Thank you dear Joseph:)//love,Anu:)

Beautiful Scars October 30, 2016 at 7:01 AM wow awesome Anu! congrats on your placement :) -luloo Anu Nayak October 31, 2016 at 11:10 AM Dear Luloo, thank you so much dear, glad you liked my story...love, Anu:)

Phillip Garcia October 22, 2016 at 7:45 AM I love this! I came looking for a homeless poem and found horses instead. This was a devilishly taunting prompt and you maneuvered through it magnificently. Congratulations, I expect it to place well in the contest. Nicely done Anu! Anu Nayak October 23, 2016 at 3:06 AM Dear Phillip, thank you so much for your pleasant visit ,words and wishes, am so glad you loved my write:)//love, Anu:)

Joseph May October 20, 2016 at 3:44 PM Very nicely penned Anulaxmi...best wishes Anu Nayak October 21, 2016 at 2:33 PM Dear Joseph, your visit and words much appreciated:) thank you very much:) // love, Anu:)