Horses

HORSES Knight of a famous land wanted a best horse for warfare To buy, along with loyal consul, he landed in horse-fair Many were on display, but one superior struck his sight Bay coat, brown muzzle, coronet, fetlock in legs white Measured from the withers , stood robust long and wide Gaskin, Stifle, hock in hind legs strong for an enduring ride Masculine back and powerhouse profound in the croup This equine for sure would stand elegant in the troop Perfect shock absorbing frog placed beneath the hoof Poll on head positioned right to flex the bit sans any goof Bouncy forelock ,mane and tail swayed with its gallop and gait Finding place in Knight’s finest stable, its prestige did elevate Love was in the air when its eyes located a lovely white mare Mare was quick to catch the love cues from this special horse there!! 20th October 2016 For contest-Horses by Shadow Hamilton

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Chris Hagy

Date: 12/19/2017 9:02:00 PM

Beautiful description of our magnificent equines!...love the mid-evil aspect too :) Although, I know first hand all too well about mares in heat! haha :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/31/2016 2:57:00 PM

A lovely rhyming poem about horses Anulaxmi! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Anu Nayak
Date: 11/8/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thank you very much dear Sandra, glad you liked my poem:) //love,Anu:)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/31/2016 11:45:00 AM

Wow! This is such amazing my dear friend, Anulaxmi! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/31/2016 11:52:00 AM

Thank you very much dear Galeo, glad you liked my poem:) //love,Anu:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/30/2016 9:17:00 AM

Wonderful Anulaxmi:) congratulations on your win with this lovely story:)

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/31/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you dear Jo, glad you liked my story//love,Anu:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2016 8:22:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win!

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/31/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you dear Joseph:)//love,Anu:)

Lu Loo

Date: 10/30/2016 7:01:00 AM

wow awesome Anu! congrats on your placement :) -luloo

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/31/2016 11:10:00 AM

Dear Luloo, thank you so much dear, glad you liked my story...love, Anu:)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 10/22/2016 7:45:00 AM

I love this! I came looking for a homeless poem and found horses instead. This was a devilishly taunting prompt and you maneuvered through it magnificently. Congratulations, I expect it to place well in the contest. Nicely done Anu!

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/23/2016 3:06:00 AM

Dear Phillip, thank you so much for your pleasant visit ,words and wishes, am so glad you loved my write:)//love, Anu:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2016 3:44:00 PM

Very nicely penned Anulaxmi...best wishes

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/21/2016 2:33:00 PM

Dear Joseph, your visit and words much appreciated:) thank you very much:) // love, Anu:)