Horses

A horse that runs wild and free
 Enjoys freedom with each stride
    No saddle on his withers be
 No grazing muzzle as a guide
    No headpiece on his poll abides

    His fetlock and his coronet feel the tickle of the grass
  As his forelock ruffles in the breeze
   No horseshoe on his hoof amass
 With the wind he trots with ease
    His gaskin flexes to run at his decree

     His frog feels the soft earth as he stands
 his coat feels the soothing rain
  Unbridled by the bit's demand
 His neighs echo through the plains
   Upon these green fields, he reigns

     His stifle and his hock aches once in awhile
 But a good gallop 'neath the dome
    of sky, brings him back in form and style
 No crupper on his croup as he roams
     For this horse calls freedom home.
                     ~~~
    10/4/16
 *The crupper is the strap that runs from the horse's dock, over the croup, to the saddle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/31/2016 2:55:00 PM
A wonderful, well-written Quintain about horses, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 10/31/2016 11:43:00 AM
Wow! This is such amazing my dear friend, Joseph! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!
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Date: 10/31/2016 11:07:00 AM
Dear Joseph, wonderful write on anatomy of horses with a lovely quintain scheme!your horse loves lot of freedom here! Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:09:00 PM
Wow Joseph, I am so in awe of this poem! You not only included what words were needed but you blended them in so well it was not at all noticeable. I love horses but have never had the pleasure of owning my own. You seem very knowledgeable. I am faving this awesome poem and I would have had it right at the top! Congratulations on your placement. ; ) 7
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Connie...hugs
Date: 10/30/2016 9:03:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your lovely win, Joseph:)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 10/30/2016 7:00:00 AM
great job Joseph! congrats on your placement :) -luloo
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 7:01:00 AM
Than you Laura
Date: 10/6/2016 8:51:00 AM
I agree with Nette, Joseph:) this is simply brilliant:) a 7:)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 10/6/2016 6:32:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Ravi
Date: 10/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
Anyone who knows horses, is a good man, I just loved the flow of this poem!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2016 4:58:00 AM
Thanks Arthur...I had to do my research to figure it out
Date: 10/5/2016 4:50:00 PM
you made this seem so easy, joseph, considering the words required for this challenge... i am amazed; superb work!..huggs
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Nette
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