Horses

HORSES Hooves, with majestic rhythm pound the ground Off the beat'n path. Roam'n wild, roam'n free Refined in grace, loyal, noble. So missunderstood Stunning in appearance, with mane and tail adrift Enchantedly each strand of hair, dances in the wind Spirited, radiant, dynamic in every way.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/6/2012 2:23:00 PM

Just stopping by, can read about horses anytime and yours fills me with those dancing hooves!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/28/2012 5:57:00 AM

My vision of horses too. I can see them as you paint the picture with your pen. Beautifully done Melanie. :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/26/2012 7:58:00 AM

Part of American history. There'd be no cowboys without horses. Beautiful intelligent animal.

Heather Ober

Date: 3/23/2012 9:56:00 AM

I love this! Acrostic poems are difficult to tackle and you do it beautifully here. You have a real talent for imagery - Your descriptions are so clear in my mind. Well done! Take care, Heather

Melanie Hillmer
Date: 3/23/2012 9:43:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem. It is comments like this, that encourages me to keep on writing.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/21/2012 6:03:00 PM

This is short, but i like it. Itis a nice acrostic poem. Lucilla

Melanie Hillmer
Date: 3/21/2012 7:59:00 PM

Thank You for viewing my poem.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/20/2012 10:19:00 AM

Wonderful poem on these majestic creatures. Love the second last line enchanted--dances in the wind. love phyl

Melanie Hillmer
Date: 3/21/2012 7:50:00 PM

Thanks yet again, for reading my poems.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/19/2012 6:03:00 PM

I appreciate this poem very much. Horses are magnificent creatures and you have written this marvelously. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura

Melanie Hillmer
Date: 3/20/2012 9:31:00 AM

Thank You for reading my poem. Horses truly are magnificent creatures. I've been facinated with them, since a very young age.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2012 8:22:00 PM

Melaine, love your acrostic,, very dynamic.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD

Melanie Hillmer
Date: 3/18/2012 8:42:00 PM

Thank You for viewing my poem. I'll be sure to visit your poems.