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Horses

HORSES

Hooves, with majestic rhythm pound the ground
Off the beat'n path. Roam'n wild, roam'n free
Refined in grace, loyal, noble. So missunderstood
Stunning in appearance, with mane and tail adrift
Enchantedly each strand of hair, dances in the wind
Spirited, radiant, dynamic in every way.

Copyright © Melanie Hillmer | Year Posted 2012

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 4/6/2012 2:23:00 PM Just stopping by, can read about horses anytime and yours fills me with those dancing hooves! Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 3/28/2012 5:57:00 AM My vision of horses too. I can see them as you paint the picture with your pen. Beautifully done Melanie. :) Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/26/2012 7:58:00 AM Part of American history. There'd be no cowboys without horses. Beautiful intelligent animal. Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 3/23/2012 9:56:00 AM I love this! Acrostic poems are difficult to tackle and you do it beautifully here. You have a real talent for imagery - Your descriptions are so clear in my mind. Well done! Take care, Heather Login to Reply Melanie Hillmer Date: 3/23/2012 9:43:00 PM Thanks for reading my poem. It is comments like this, that encourages me to keep on writing.

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/21/2012 6:03:00 PM This is short, but i like it. Itis a nice acrostic poem. Lucilla Login to Reply Melanie Hillmer Date: 3/21/2012 7:59:00 PM Thank You for viewing my poem.

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/20/2012 10:19:00 AM Wonderful poem on these majestic creatures. Love the second last line enchanted--dances in the wind. love phyl Login to Reply Melanie Hillmer Date: 3/21/2012 7:50:00 PM Thanks yet again, for reading my poems.

Laura Breidenthal Date: 3/19/2012 6:03:00 PM I appreciate this poem very much. Horses are magnificent creatures and you have written this marvelously. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura Login to Reply Melanie Hillmer Date: 3/20/2012 9:31:00 AM Thank You for reading my poem. Horses truly are magnificent creatures. I've been facinated with them, since a very young age.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/18/2012 8:22:00 PM Melaine, love your acrostic,, very dynamic.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD Login to Reply Melanie Hillmer Date: 3/18/2012 8:42:00 PM Thank You for viewing my poem. I'll be sure to visit your poems.