Melanie Hillmer Poet Acrostic

Horses

HORSES

Hooves, with majestic rhythm pound the ground
Off the beat'n path. Roam'n wild, roam'n free
Refined in grace, loyal, noble. So missunderstood
Stunning in appearance, with mane and tail adrift
Enchantedly each strand of hair, dances in the wind
Spirited, radiant, dynamic in every way.

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Elizabeth Wesley April 6, 2012 at 2:23 PM Just stopping by, can read about horses anytime and yours fills me with those dancing hooves!

Elizabeth Wesley March 28, 2012 at 5:57 AM My vision of horses too. I can see them as you paint the picture with your pen. Beautifully done Melanie. :)

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 26, 2012 at 7:58 AM Part of American history. There'd be no cowboys without horses. Beautiful intelligent animal.

Heather Ober March 23, 2012 at 9:56 AM I love this! Acrostic poems are difficult to tackle and you do it beautifully here. You have a real talent for imagery - Your descriptions are so clear in my mind. Well done! Take care, Heather Melanie Hillmer March 23, 2012 at 9:43 PM Thanks for reading my poem. It is comments like this, that encourages me to keep on writing.

Lucilla Carrillo March 21, 2012 at 6:03 PM This is short, but i like it. Itis a nice acrostic poem. Lucilla Melanie Hillmer March 21, 2012 at 7:59 PM Thank You for viewing my poem.

Phyllis Babcock March 20, 2012 at 10:19 AM Wonderful poem on these majestic creatures. Love the second last line enchanted--dances in the wind. love phyl Melanie Hillmer March 21, 2012 at 7:50 PM Thanks yet again, for reading my poems.

Laura Breidenthal March 19, 2012 at 6:03 PM I appreciate this poem very much. Horses are magnificent creatures and you have written this marvelously. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura Melanie Hillmer March 20, 2012 at 9:31 AM Thank You for reading my poem. Horses truly are magnificent creatures. I've been facinated with them, since a very young age.

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2012 at 8:22 PM Melaine, love your acrostic,, very dynamic.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD Melanie Hillmer March 18, 2012 at 8:42 PM Thank You for viewing my poem. I'll be sure to visit your poems.