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Horse At the Gate

Eager to gait they were lined up at the gate A hoarse commentator announced the favorite horse The start pistol was fired and the race began A roaring crowd was known at this racecourse Time seemed like it just flew by and the race was now over The commentator realizing he indeed was getting the flu The crowd favorite was of course the winner This wasn't the first time as there had been more than a few A chance to see the winner gait up close Racing club members were moved to gate four A replacement arrived and the commentator was relieved So hoarse was he his voice was no more A day of racing is just a job for some But to most that attend it's a great day of fun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/30/2016 1:49:00 PM
Congrats Susan to win. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 3/29/2016 5:19:00 PM
Hi Susan, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:14:00 AM
Brilliant take Susan.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/28/2016 1:59:00 PM
Very clever wordplay Susan congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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