Horse Acrostic

HORSE


Hell-bent stallion muscles led the mustangs through the plain,

On their heels rode hard a hired man –his job to rope the best--

Rearing high the stallion—urging speed as autumn winds dance thru his mane.

Sheets of lighting limned silhouettes as they pounded toward the west--

Enchanted now the man reined in—this day let beauty rule his breast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 20, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Victoria, congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA
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September 27, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Glad you enjoyed it! always happy to hear comments...and I also LOVE horses--especially Indian ponies and Arabians! V
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September 20, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Victoria,, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:04 PM
thanks! glad always to hear your comments! V
Delaney Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Enchanting acrostic Virginia. Congrats on your win. It joins my fav poems list. SuZ
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Thanks SuZ....glad to be on your list.....nice to be on a good list for a change...ha!
Morgan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:54 AM
I hope that you have had this opportunity to simply sit in awe as they race by.....V
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:54 AM
This is a really cool acrostic, Victoria. I love how you show the power of the horse in this one. congrats for your win in my contest.
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Andrea--a joy to be able to portray my feeling to a reader--astute as you are--V PS thanks for suggesting this topic, or i would never have given it a second thought!
Mehta Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Nice exporessions
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:58 AM
My gratitude for your comment--readers rarely say what they think! V
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Great acrostic Victoria. You have such a wonderful way with words.
Anderson-Throop Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Jon, Sorry that i HAVE lost touch. am back at work now, so have no GOOD excuse (is there ever a good excuse) you are always reading/writing, so i am forever browbeating myselffor long neglected responses......you are ever attending conferences or reading amazing words of prose....V
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:56 AM
thanks Jon--from you it is a fine compliment!V
A   Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 4:06 PM
I like your acrostic... Linda
Anderson-Throop Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 4:11 PM
thanks....i can't resist to tell a story..guess I am a story teller at heart...
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