Horizontal Line
What is it about
the horizontal line
-------------------
that pulls us to it?
My ex-wife was
- (is) so fond of -
Viewing the horizon
of sandy beaches
as if it was - (is)
the edge of heaven
I also think I can
discern something,
something important,
distant - over there
So too, the long prairie
line to a blue storm
to come soon, tomorrow
It is no different, no
more sure to allude,
in its poignancy
at the edge of vision
How's that for
some poetic ending?
© Goode Guy 2012-12-09
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