Horizon

horizon sunset --

into the blast of the wind 

she entrusts her dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 5:59 PM
I really like this, Shirley! I'd put an S on the end of entrust. Then it will be perfect!
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Shirley, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
Sietesantos Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 8:55 AM
I love this Haiku!
Mohammed Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 12:11 PM
I just want to express a heartfelt thanks for your comments on my works in the past Shirley. I remember you.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Who knows where dreams may take us if we entrust them to the winds of change.
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:09 AM
This is beautiful Shirley, Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3
Sergi Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Shirley wonderful Haiku
Mehta Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 5:37 AM
Lovely images, shirley
Candy Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Glad u like it, Dr. Ram :)) Thank you for stopping by..
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