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Hopless Breath

I take a breath I take it in deep I lay in my bed But not asleep The fan blades are spinning My world is so still But there is a voice With a kiss it can kill The night is dark But the shadow stands out The dark figure Whispers, screams, shouts But this shadow It’s in my mind What exactly Does it want me to find Like every morning I open my eyes Hope for the day Without any lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/16/2009 12:53:00 AM
Love your descriptions...Raul
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