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Hoping For Love and Trust

Fretting 
Over his lies
Trust not 

Trusting
Never again
Now wise

Wisdom
Comes with life
I learned

Learning
To share my heart
Cautious

Caution
on longest days
yields peace

Peaceful
Flowing waters
Bring hope

Hopeful
Fretting no more
Heart's strong

Strength builds
Tower of faith
Rising

Sunrise 
Brightens dark days
Light shines

Shining
My stride returns
With love

Loving
Not enabling
Trust earned


For Richard's Mussetle Train Contest, 12/1/14

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Kelly Deschler Date: 1/13/2015 12:21:00 AM Trust is something that can only be earned with patience, love and forgiveness. You've expressed this so beautifully here! Congrats on the win, Rhonda! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/11/2015 8:58:00 PM Nice win, Rhonda... Luv ~PD Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 1/10/2015 9:03:00 AM Hi Rhonda, I like a poem that is packed and compact with wisdom, such is evidenced here. Your last stanza, "loving, not enabling, trust earned" is powerful, potent and so true. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I rated it a 7. Have a great week end. Earl Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 1/6/2015 11:58:00 AM Hey, very nice. Congrats. Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/5/2015 11:42:00 PM This is fantastic, congrats on the win Rhonda...huggs Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/5/2015 10:47:00 PM Great write and win Rhonda ...congrats Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/5/2015 5:09:00 PM Hi Rhonda, congratulations on your win! Excellent form and words chosen with wisdom within as well! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/5/2015 4:45:00 PM Hi Rhonda! Your trust in love has landed you a winning poem! Well done and congratulations! // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/5/2015 4:00:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/5/2015 3:25:00 PM Great Job! thanks for entering my contest. Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/2/2014 10:55:00 PM I absolutely loved this one, so sweet and filled with wisdom!! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/2/2014 5:12:00 AM Rhonda, I enjoyed the progression in this write of yours.. We always hope hey.. try not to despair. Thank you for popping in on my side as well *hugs* xx Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 12/1/2014 5:40:00 PM Very sound advice here and very nice pen here my dear friend Rhonda! Need to be very cautious to whom our hearts we give. A 7 for me! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xoxxo D. Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 12/1/2014 5:09:00 PM Outstanding -- the wording flows but more importantly -- it contains an incredible amount wisdom from the heart!! Login to Reply

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 12/1/2014 4:03:00 PM Very unique Rhonda, enjoyed this gem Keith:-) Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 12/1/2014 4:02:00 PM Excellent Rhonda ....Loved how you transitioned from car to car...hugs Tim Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/1/2014 4:01:00 PM You nailed it Rhonda, I have to fav this one too, it may be famous one day. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2014 2:41:00 PM brilliantly penned Rhonda _ i love the form Richard has found for us:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply