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Hoping for Love and Trust

Fretting Over his lies Trust not Trusting Never again Now wise Wisdom Comes with life I learned Learning To share my heart Cautious Caution on longest days yields peace Peaceful Flowing waters Bring hope Hopeful Fretting no more Heart's strong Strength builds Tower of faith Rising Sunrise Brightens dark days Light shines Shining My stride returns With love Loving Not enabling Trust earned For Richard's Mussetle Train Contest, 12/1/14

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Date: 1/13/2015 12:21:00 AM
Trust is something that can only be earned with patience, love and forgiveness. You've expressed this so beautifully here! Congrats on the win, Rhonda!
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Date: 1/11/2015 8:58:00 PM
Nice win, Rhonda... Luv ~PD
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:03:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, I like a poem that is packed and compact with wisdom, such is evidenced here. Your last stanza, "loving, not enabling, trust earned" is powerful, potent and so true. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I rated it a 7. Have a great week end. Earl
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:52:00 PM
Rhonda, your write is fabulous.. Congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:58:00 AM
Hey, very nice. Congrats.
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:42:00 PM
This is fantastic, congrats on the win Rhonda...huggs
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Date: 1/5/2015 10:47:00 PM
Great write and win Rhonda ...congrats
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:09:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, congratulations on your win! Excellent form and words chosen with wisdom within as well! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:45:00 PM
Hi Rhonda! Your trust in love has landed you a winning poem! Well done and congratulations! // paul
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2015 3:25:00 PM
Great Job! thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:55:00 PM
I absolutely loved this one, so sweet and filled with wisdom!!
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:12:00 AM
Rhonda, I enjoyed the progression in this write of yours.. We always hope hey.. try not to despair. Thank you for popping in on my side as well *hugs* xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 5:40:00 PM
Very sound advice here and very nice pen here my dear friend Rhonda! Need to be very cautious to whom our hearts we give. A 7 for me! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xoxxo D.
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Date: 12/1/2014 5:09:00 PM
Outstanding -- the wording flows but more importantly -- it contains an incredible amount wisdom from the heart!!
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:03:00 PM
Very unique Rhonda, enjoyed this gem Keith:-)
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:02:00 PM
Excellent Rhonda ....Loved how you transitioned from car to car...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:01:00 PM
You nailed it Rhonda, I have to fav this one too, it may be famous one day.
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:41:00 PM
brilliantly penned Rhonda _ i love the form Richard has found for us:-) Hugs jan xx
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