Hopelessly In Love

My love, you saunter in my heart of golden sand touching the waves of heaven that ebb and band emerald in the balm teasing light on my palm of my hand. With a breath beneath the sun and sky my soul you command.
2/13/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Wonderful, Eve. I particularly loved the last line. Congrats on your win.
Acrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Oh yes, your poems suck  im so kidding, they are lovely  (:
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:25 AM
:)
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:30 PM
very very poetic, Eve!! Congrats on your well deserved win.
Godwin Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Wow, Nelly and whoa, Nelly- another sensually driven romantic ew la la poem. Is it hot in here? I loved it! Be blessed ... CayCay
Payton Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Eve, after I read this you deserved your placement. Great job.
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Hi Eve, These four lines are just beautiful. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations Eve Regards Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:07 PM
- Congratulations Eve, a beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Berggren Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Congrats on your win.Your poem is very romantic for sure.
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:01 AM
So beautiful Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Awesome 4-liner. Beautiful, Eve.
Michael Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Soothing love...I like it...Happy Valentine's day to you and yours
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:45 AM
Cupid has been very busy on here, another great four line romantic verse. Good luck in the contest Eve. Regards Tom
Kannan Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:16 AM
Lovely imagery Eve... Great lines... Good luck in the contest...
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