Hopeless

Hopeless
from sky falls rainbow, as clouds lose silver lining - dreams deferred drifting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hobbs Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:55 AM
Pandita, you seem to really excel at the haiku form. It's a hard one to master with such limitations. My hat's off to you for being able to convey so much meaning in such a abbreviated format.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Hi Luke, I really try to write good haiku and I am improving as I go along. But for each one I write, I go back to read the works of the masters to get ideas on techniques, etc. Thank you again for your lovely feedback and support! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Hi Pandita, I really like this great haiku. Well done!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:38 PM
Thanks much, Kika. I really appreciate it! Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 4:39 PM
hey, here is a cloud poem that could also be in that contest. It is very nice.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 9:04 PM
Many thanks, Andrea. I'd forgotten all about this one - you're right it could work. Warmest regards always!
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