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Hopeless

Hopeless from sky falls rainbow, as clouds lose silver lining - dreams deferred drifting

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Luke Hobbs

Date: 9/3/2018 5:55:00 AM

Pandita, you seem to really excel at the haiku form. It's a hard one to master with such limitations. My hat's off to you for being able to convey so much meaning in such a abbreviated format.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2018 8:13:00 AM

Hi Luke, I really try to write good haiku and I am improving as I go along. But for each one I write, I go back to read the works of the masters to get ideas on techniques, etc. Thank you again for your lovely feedback and support! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 11:12:00 PM

Hi Pandita, I really like this great haiku. Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 11:38:00 PM

Thanks much, Kika. I really appreciate it! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2014 4:39:00 PM

hey, here is a cloud poem that could also be in that contest. It is very nice.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2014 9:04:00 PM

Many thanks, Andrea. I'd forgotten all about this one - you're right it could work. Warmest regards always!