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October 17, 2023

"How are you feeling today" - one-liner 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Silent One

Every day mind facing challenge to reach unattainable moon, queen of starlit sky, gleaming to inspire.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2023 5:04:00 PM

Dearest Mala, your vivid heavenly imagery of reaching for the moon describes your chosen word "hopeful" with lovely poetic finesse. A splendid monoku! Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/23/2023 8:36:00 AM

Dearest Susan, I feel honoured with your visit and comments. Your comments are a joy to read, and an assurance for continuing to write. I look forward to reading your classic poems - Love and hugs ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 1:13:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win with your lovely write. I enjoyed reading it again. Never give up hope. Have a blessed/great day writing away.....

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:51:00 AM

Always keep the faith.. Congratulations on your placement.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thank you. Appreciate the placement.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2023 1:01:00 PM

A lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck"... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2023 12:45:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Look forward to reading yours.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 10:54:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Mala :) - (How do you really feel, did you get corona too ?) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2023 11:45:00 AM

- Autumn is time for "crap" ... stay well you too my friend :) - I hope you reach the moon :) - <3 and hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 11:34:00 AM

I might say “oh crap! Another doctor’s appointment?” Ha ha ha! But this is true too! Hope to reach the Moon, in a very short time! Love, Dear Friend. Stay well.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/17/2023 8:15:00 AM

A good description. Well done.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 8:26:00 AM

I feel so assured with your comment, Jeanette! Thank you, Dear Poet.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/17/2023 7:40:00 AM

Oh wow, this is so beautiful and thoughtful dear poetess, I absolutely love the idea of expressing the desire to reach the unattainable.. Really something that can ignite the fire for living life and enjoying its essence. I also love how you've described the moon as queen of starlit sky! Wowww.. An inspiring and eloquent poem, reflecting hope.. Love this, best of luck for the contest :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 7:44:00 AM

Wow, Hiya! Silent One is a such a great sponsor who inspires everybody. I am inspired by all of my friends and new talented sisters here. Thank you for commenting. I actually didn't even enter the one-liner for contest. Love and Hugs ~ Mala