Joanna Daniel Poet Tritina

Hope Someday

In the beginning, there was hope, 
Then something shifted in me, 
Now, all I am left with are tears, 

Why didn't God see my aching tears? 
How can I still, for the best, hope?
How can this pain be good for me? 

Something ingrained believes in me, 
But, deep inside, flow broken tears, 
I have leftover faith and hope, 

I hope someday this sad me will be replaced with joyful tears. 



(24.09.2026) 
(Not for contest)

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Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2026 at 11:39 AM - Sending you smiles and tears of joy ... deeply moving, Joanna - hugs

Hiya Sharma September 25, 2026 at 7:52 AM Gosh sigh, this is such a poignant and deep poem dear Joanna, the way you've squeezed the emotions of your soul here, the sentiments poured from your heart... Sometimes all life leaves for us are tears.. and I am certainly familiar with that. And how we cling onto the thread of hope! A very heartfelt piece. Such deep questionings you've layered here! Also the glimmer of faith! Felt everything! Sending you fairy starsz and hugsz ~ 🌙💫🧚

Abdullah Alhemaidy September 25, 2026 at 6:43 AM Best hope! Things always could be better!

Sotto Poet September 25, 2026 at 4:53 AM A heartfelt exploration of hope mixed with sorrow and faith. The poem conveys a deep emotional struggle while still holding on to belief in better days ahead. Your words tug at the heartstrings and offer a relatable sense of waiting for brighter moments.

Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2026 at 4:37 AM Sending you a hug. Such pain and sadness. We can be brought to the brink.