Makayla Gilchrist Poet Rhyme

Hope Or Hopelessness

HOPE OR HOPELESSNESS

Can your savior also be your villan
I see my family's eyes can I really tell em
This hurt inside is bursting out
Should I really say what this is about

A slap of the face ,  a burst of the mouth
Out I scream,  but all he does is shout
Ugly, fat, good for nothing
If you think that's bad let me tell u something

Kisses of love for another girl
I wish I were in another world
Feeling abused,  used,  but that's no excuse
So many lies,  denys,  where is all the proof? 
Denial takes form in my brain
What can I do to ease the pain? 

Walk away , run as fast as u can
There is more to this world he is just a man
Cross my heart and hope to die
He doesn't know I'm carrying his child
How many years must I go through
Until I'm torn broken,  battered , blue? 
Get the hell out run , scatter
But when he says he's sorry that's all that matters. 

A hug an embrace, a peck on the cheek
My tears they fall so humble so meek
Broken promises repeated again
I pray the lord a angel to send
Hold me close so close to u
Abusive by nature but to my heart so true.

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Skat A September 15, 2016 at 11:38 PM Makayla , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT Makayla Gilchrist September 16, 2016 at 5:00 AM Thank you skat :)

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2016 at 4:00 PM Makayla Gilchrist ., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Makayla Gilchrist September 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM I will do just that linda thank you for such a warm welcome

Manmath Dalei September 9, 2016 at 10:50 PM Gilchrist, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love//Manmath.

Holly Bohto September 9, 2016 at 7:41 PM Run for the hills. He's not worth it. If this poem is your truth. You best believe it. He's showing you who he is. Run for the hills. He's leaving a trail of tears. Don't be caught up in it Beautiful pain. The video by eminem. Set fire to yesterday. And safely get away. Makayla Gilchrist September 9, 2016 at 7:42 PM Beautiful ?