Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Verse

Hope of Dawn

The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you 
of wisdom all your own in soft sprinklings of light!
Endless, comes a golden crest of sunrise within you, 
a gift sprawled before you wrapped in new day,
crafted to inspire graceful strokes in floating skies, 
erased of masks and last night’s moonless memories..    
     

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 7/26/15
for Nette's Complete the Lines! Contest
(Line #7 - Rumi)

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David Meade August 16, 2015 at 11:28 PM Soft and sweet is the morning light -- chasing the darkness away. Your words filled my heart with the radiance of hope! Missed you!

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2015 at 8:44 PM wow Rhonda. that is some fantastic poem you got from the first line. I just don't see enough of you. Wish you would visit me more!!! Hope you are feeling ok these days.

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2015 at 1:07 AM fascinated by the lure of this piece, rhonda.. congrats and thanks for gracing my contest

Laura Leiser August 4, 2015 at 12:40 PM Great imagery, and congrats on your win, Rhonda :)

Tammy Reams August 4, 2015 at 8:45 AM Congrats on your win Rhonda! Love it!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 12:51 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rhonda! Wonderful imagery!

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 12:43 AM Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Eve Roper August 3, 2015 at 9:24 PM Rhonda, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 4:42 PM dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless August 3, 2015 at 8:29 AM ..."A GOLDEN CREST OF SUNRISE WITHIN" --B I N G O. Thank you for this poetic reminder that each day is....just that....each day....to be lived.

Frederic Parker July 26, 2015 at 7:21 PM Nice write, this poem of secrects reveals wisdom..good luck..mine too is line 7

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 5:58 PM so so beautiful flow to your lines Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) BTW - Its line 7 Rumi ... I did the same one:-) Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 26, 2015 at 6:24 PM Thanks, Jan! I wrote more than one.