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Hope of Dawn

The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you of wisdom all your own in soft sprinklings of light! Endless, comes a golden crest of sunrise within you, a gift sprawled before you wrapped in new day, crafted to inspire graceful strokes in floating skies, erased of masks and last night’s moonless memories.
. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 7/26/15 for Nette's Complete the Lines! Contest (Line #7 - Rumi)

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Date: 8/16/2015 11:28:00 PM
Soft and sweet is the morning light -- chasing the darkness away. Your words filled my heart with the radiance of hope! Missed you!
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:44:00 PM
wow Rhonda. that is some fantastic poem you got from the first line. I just don't see enough of you. Wish you would visit me more!!! Hope you are feeling ok these days.
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:07:00 AM
fascinated by the lure of this piece, rhonda.. congrats and thanks for gracing my contest
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:40:00 PM
Great imagery, and congrats on your win, Rhonda :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win Rhonda! Love it!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rhonda! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:24:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:42:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:29:00 AM
..."A GOLDEN CREST OF SUNRISE WITHIN" --B I N G O. Thank you for this poetic reminder that each day is....just that....each day....to be lived.
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:21:00 PM
Nice write, this poem of secrects reveals wisdom..good luck..mine too is line 7
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:58:00 PM
so so beautiful flow to your lines Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) BTW - Its line 7 Rumi ... I did the same one:-)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/26/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! I wrote more than one.

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