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Hope of Dawn

The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you 
of wisdom all your own in soft sprinklings of light!
Endless, comes a golden crest of sunrise within you, 
a gift sprawled before you wrapped in new day,
crafted to inspire graceful strokes in floating skies, 
erased of masks and last night’s moonless memories..    
     

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 7/26/15
for Nette's Complete the Lines! Contest
(Line #7 - Rumi)

Copyright © Rhonda Johnson-Saunders | Year Posted 2015

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David Meade Date: 8/16/2015 11:28:00 PM Soft and sweet is the morning light -- chasing the darkness away. Your words filled my heart with the radiance of hope! Missed you! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2015 8:44:00 PM wow Rhonda. that is some fantastic poem you got from the first line. I just don't see enough of you. Wish you would visit me more!!! Hope you are feeling ok these days. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/5/2015 1:07:00 AM fascinated by the lure of this piece, rhonda.. congrats and thanks for gracing my contest Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 8/4/2015 12:40:00 PM Great imagery, and congrats on your win, Rhonda :) Login to Reply

Tammy Reams Date: 8/4/2015 8:45:00 AM Congrats on your win Rhonda! Love it! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/4/2015 12:51:00 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rhonda! Wonderful imagery! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 AM Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT** Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 8/3/2015 9:24:00 PM Rhonda, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/3/2015 4:42:00 PM dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 8/3/2015 8:29:00 AM ..."A GOLDEN CREST OF SUNRISE WITHIN" --B I N G O. Thank you for this poetic reminder that each day is....just that....each day....to be lived. Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 7/26/2015 7:21:00 PM Nice write, this poem of secrects reveals wisdom..good luck..mine too is line 7 Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2015 5:58:00 PM so so beautiful flow to your lines Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) BTW - Its line 7 Rumi ... I did the same one:-) Login to Reply Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 7/26/2015 6:24:00 PM Thanks, Jan! I wrote more than one.