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Hope In the Skies

alabaster white

the clouds floating up above...

    morning ripe with hope




A Nature Themed Haiku With Color Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
Date written and submitted: 01/25/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 11:42 PM
This is splendid and one I particularly enjoyed.
Ibeh Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Very uplifting Edward, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Jan:-)
Neumann Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Morning ripe with hope. What else do we need? Kind wishes, Kai
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Kai:-)
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:22 AM
- Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:23 AM
Hopeful Haiku.. Congrats on your placement Edward..
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thank you, Jenish:-)
Kauffman Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations Edward. I love the final line. Really nice work!
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, Sam:-)
Messina Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Very nice, Edward. Congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, Charles:-)
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:03 PM
Es, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely expressed haiku!
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you for my placement, Tania:-)
Dutta Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 12:55 PM
WOW! I learn the new word 'alabaster'. All the best.
Ibeh Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Thank you, Anisha! It's such a cool word isn't it?:-)
Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 12:03 AM
Very lovely depiction of the hope that a new day brings, Edward. I like the way you used the word ripe to represent the bounty of the day.
Ibeh Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!:-)
Adams Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:35 PM
beautifully penned Edward... i love the word alabaster... just sounds so poetic... best wishes in the contest... hugs
Ibeh Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Thank you much, Sandra:-) Yeah, that word rolls off the tongue beautifully!
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:29 PM
Excellent, Edward. A feel good poem.
Ibeh Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much, Line:-)
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