Gershon Wolf Poet Couplet

Hope I Haven't Disturbed You

  
     Though I may well have perturbed you
        I hope I haven’t disturbed you

     Trying out a new writing style tonight**
        one where right is left and left is right
       
     I learned it in a college seminar, truth be told
        and just now recalled it, having grown old
   



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    **See the three other poems I posted tonight.

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David Crandall September 25, 2025 at 8:08 PM You and CayCay already got all the good punctuation marks;;;;;;;;got me curious, gonna look at those others.

Joe Maverick September 24, 2025 at 6:54 AM Its ok to grow old..And especially if you gain wisdom G W.' Which is allways Of value.'

CayCay Godwin September 22, 2025 at 9:52 PM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:06 PM ??????????????????

sara Etgen-Baker September 22, 2025 at 4:40 PM enjoying this 'new style,' Gershon. Fascinating when we revisit a concept from years gone by and find out just how applicable it is not...well said Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:07 PM Fascinating when it suddenly hits one out of nowhere as well.

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2025 at 1:33 PM I feel a bit disturbed…let me check out the right, left, left WRITE! Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:07 PM Well-centered response, Kim.

Charles Messina September 22, 2025 at 4:23 AM I read your other three poems, I like the style, Gershon. Amazing how we bring back things we remember from years past. Keep up the good work, My friend. ~Shanah Tovah u'Metukah! ~CM Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:08 PM Well, a Hebrew expert on Poetry Soup. Never thought I'd see the day. Thanks, CM

Rowena Velasco September 22, 2025 at 3:48 AM Playful and thoughtful...proof that creativity grows more fun with age! Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:16 PM Painful to admit that you're right. ~ Art T.H. Ritus

Deb M September 21, 2025 at 8:45 PM Interesting! You never disturb BB…Debx Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:17 PM I may not disturb, though I am disturbed. ~ DND

Mike Bayles September 21, 2025 at 7:55 PM Nice poem of opposites. Gershon Wolf September 24, 2025 at 9:18 PM Appreciated, Mike.