Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Hope Fulfillment

Written: September 24, 2024, For Mohan Chutani Minichu Contest
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My fate brilliance award
I'm stuck on a small path, getting wicked advice
floating sword

should strive to dream.
stoutly climb the steps in a trice
breeze stream!

high hope
weave breath precise
grope!!

my fate brilliance award
Stoutly climb the steps in a trice
grope!!

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Paige Hind September 27, 2024 at 6:09 PM Really like your Minichu. Awesome work.

Victor Buhagiar September 26, 2024 at 8:41 AM The worst thing anyone can do is give bad advice. Great reflective poem.

nastyolives blegh September 24, 2024 at 1:49 PM " should strive to dream. stoutly climb the steps in a trice breeze stream!" mm, pleasure reading

Paula Goldsmith September 24, 2024 at 12:43 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Hope Fulfillment" write. Life is filled with wicked advice. I am glad you are back writing again. "Good Luck" Have a beautiful day writing away...............