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Hope For Tomorrow

Stuck in a quagmire
Bound by a bog
Blinded by mist
And shrouded by fog

I try to move forward
But only go down
Grasping and groping 
To find solid ground

All of my efforts
And all of my pains
Only produce
More taxable gains

Each swing of my hammer
Each bead of my sweat
Just launches me further
And deeper in debt

If only just once
A buck was a buck
And not just a target
With me as the duck

I might live to flourish
Fulfilling my dreams
Instead of recurring
To shadows and schemes

But maybe one day
The clouds will all break
The sun will shine through
And I will awake

To stand in the glory
That I should have known
Could only be found
At the side of the throne


Rockman  :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/18/2013 12:37:00 AM
Your poetry speaks volumes, Favorite lines "If only just once A buck was a buck And not just a target With me as the duck" Another very well written and thought provoking piece of art.
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Date: 9/19/2013 11:08:00 PM
very thought provoking and deep. powerful and sincere. good job
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Date: 6/16/2013 5:35:00 AM
Rockman -- I do like your work. I think you may have had a hard life and pray you have all you want and deserve my friend.
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Date: 4/26/2013 2:58:00 PM
Ahmen! Loved the flow and how you worded every thing... Quite brilliant.
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Date: 4/24/2013 10:56:00 AM
Vary nice Rockman I can see why my poem might put you off . Thanks for hanging there.
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Date: 4/22/2013 3:45:00 PM
i love the rhythm and flow of this poem - nice job!
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:24:00 AM
your bog imagery works well.... i like the line " ...recurring to shadows and schemes..."
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